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A world
that is spinning
out of control and seems
to be getting worse by the day
and one that feeds constant division
so when will people finally wake up to
all that is going on around them and to whom
this involves and affected nonetheless in one way
or another as this world has become a very darkened version
Of itself as much light needs to shine through and overcome the shadows
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10 responses to “Stair Poem (A World)”
This is such a striking use of the stair poem form 🌍 Each line growing heavier really mirrors the feeling of the world’s weight building up. Glad it ends reaching for light rather than staying in the dark.
— Khadija 🤍
I appreciate that very much Khadija, really glad it resonated with you and more to come. Thanks for reading and your outlook 🙂
We need more light. People are seeing the division, and I have hope for the future. Well written.
I agree with you and thank you very much
Good use of the poetic form. The world definitely needs more light. We each can be the light in the spaces we occupy. Great poem.
Thank you very much, and thanks for reading and for your insight 🙂
Very heartfelt reflections.
I appreciate that very much
Loveeee the concrete poetry. How fun! I did one called The Dance. It was shaped into a funnel cloud. It was challenging but still fun to create.
Appreciate that very much and cool, and can be challenging but fun I agree 🙂