
Feeling and reeling
from the ups and downs,
as certain thoughts over time,
have been circling around—
both positive and negative,
and to what also; gives and takes—
thoughts of success,
and thoughts from mistakes,
thoughts of punctuality—
and no thought of running late,
for the thoughts of actuality,
and the many ideas of reality—
just circling about—
without a doubt,
thoughts circling in,
thoughts circling out,
running rampant; and at times,
out of control—
ones that shine,
and some misaligned; from a heart that froze,
and who knows—
from those that aim to run smoothly,
and others that keep one; totally on their toes,
thoughts that cause a smile
and thoughts that can bask
in a frown—
ones that lift up; and also pull down,
thoughts that stagnate,
and thoughts that boost,
far beyond leaps and bounds,
as a mind that finds—
that it moves as continuous waves,
From thoughts circling around
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2 responses to “Circling Around”
Excellent. Loved how you held the poem together, never straying from the core.
Brilliant stuff.
Thank you very much, and glad you enjoyed it 🙂